this one is the original post I corrected.
My easter was just ok. I'm not that kind of person who goes to the church in days like these but the thing I did was to be with all my family and just have a nice time together , We also have very good news share with each other , for example that my brother is getting married on December of this year and that two of my cousins are going to be parents again! so the family is getting bigger and bigger, and all that is going to happen this year so ...we conclude that this year is going to be spectacular!
My easter was just ok. I'm not that kind of person who goes to the church in days like these but the thing I did was to be with all my family and just have a nice time together , We also have very good news share with each other , for example that my brother is getting married on December of this year and that two of my cousins are going to be parents again! so the family is getting bigger and bigger, and all that is going to happen this year so ...we conclude that this year is going to be spectacular!
I really love to be with my family , we , I mean my cousins, brother and me, still exchange those chocolate eggs even though we're not children anymore and the very best thing is that this kind of moments are still fun for us because we're so closed to each other.
I really enjoy this easter , I hope you readers had enjoyed this recent easter as much as I did.
c'ya!
bye!
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and this is the corrections
My easter was just ok. I'm not that kind of person who goes to the church in(wf) days like these but the thing I did was to be with all my family and just have a nice time together , We also have (t) very good news (X) share (with) each other , for example that my brother is getting married on December of this year and (that) two of my cousins are going to be parents again! so the family is getting bigger and bigger, and all that is going to happen this year so ...we conclude that this year is going to be spectacular!
I really love to be with my family , we , I mean my cousins, brother and me, still exchange those chocolate eggs even though we're not children anymore and the (very) best thing is that this kind of moments are still fun for us because we're so closed to each other.
I really enjoy this easter , I hope you readers had enjoyed this recent easter as much as I did.
c'ya!
bye!
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